I put these things on my poster because its what I think is coming of age. When you get older, take on more responsibilites and that would also be taking steps to bigger things. Friendship is important because you have to choose the right friends in order to have a good friendship that is strong. Making your own money is also growing up because you are working for the money all by yourself. When I think of coming of age, I think of all the things that show that you are getting older and being more independent.
You've given some thought to the elements of your poster. For the revision, see if you can find the best possible images that represent each element and also look at layout and balance. mrs s
I like the poster. Even though its a draft you still put thought to it. What you should do is bring out the text more by outlining it so that it you can read the it better. You should also balance out each image & also make them stand out as well. Make each image have its own meaning to it. Overall good job & can't wait to see your final!
I like your poster, Jisel its really cute and it suites you. I think you should have more emphasis on the pictures; You should put more pictures and it make it stand out more. Also another font would be better as well, but overall its a good poster!
This is my draft for the coming of age poster:)
I put these things on my poster because its what I think is coming of age. When you get older, take on more responsibilites and that would also be taking steps to bigger things. Friendship is important because you have to choose the right friends in order to have a good friendship that is strong. Making your own money is also growing up because you are working for the money all by yourself. When I think of coming of age, I think of all the things that show that you are getting older and being more independent.
ReplyDeleteHi Jisel,
ReplyDeleteYou've given some thought to the elements of your poster. For the revision, see if you can find the best possible images that represent each element and also look at layout and balance.
mrs s
I like the poster. Even though its a draft you still put thought to it. What you should do is bring out the text more by outlining it so that it you can read the it better. You should also balance out each image & also make them stand out as well. Make each image have its own meaning to it.
ReplyDeleteOverall good job & can't wait to see your final!
-thea
I like your poster, Jisel its really cute and it suites you. I think you should have more emphasis on the pictures; You should put more pictures and it make it stand out more. Also another font would be better as well, but overall its a good poster!
ReplyDelete-Cynthia